A Chip off my Heart

Words are thrown at you,

Venom tainted arrows just out of Ego,

Which might even be from your dear?

Capable of shattering the love, I fear.

Which trait is the best form of Resilience?

I suppose the only thing would be Silence;

To show that you will never let go,

Ending up in cooling her Ego.

Those arrows might just be out of stress,

Why not pour it out over a cup of tea,

Than to put both of us at distress,

Just like the helpless mariner out at Pathless Sea.

Life never ends with such quarters,

Skill lies in navigating through the troubled waters.

Your heart might just be hit by Boulders,

Here I am, ready to offer my Shoulders…..

  • S.G.P

3 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. krishnan
    Aug 05, 2009 @ 14:59:07

    Nice one da.


  2. Bhagi
    Aug 06, 2009 @ 16:30:53

    hey… good one!


  3. Kartik Srinivasan
    Aug 16, 2009 @ 18:15:36

    hi man,

    This is me again to help you on ur writing. I am not basically a pro but an amateur just running around finding faults till the day none respect me.

    It was a good piece of work and I find it difficult to appreciate cos
    1. Its a poem
    2. Its English.
    3. The writer is You.
    4. you writing about love.

    I get to understand that Krishnan hasn’t understood but felt it was far above his scope and agreed to be great.

    Goodwork man.

    Writing poetries is a tough job and u have done a commendable job.

    Great going. come up with such great verses.


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