Oh Mi Amor !!

To You, who gave me love and left me in pain.

I used to love you a lot,

Moment doesn’t pass without your thought,

But how could you burn a hole in my heart,

Is it fun to see my life fall apart?


You were my life’s greatest hope,

But, how could you treat me like a joke?

I thought to end my life with a rope,

God! I loved you beyond my scope.


How could I move on without you?

Am stuck here not knowing what to do,

I wish I had the sense and knew,

You will fade like a drop of dew.


I thought I could be your Valentine,

But I was nothing but the bunny in Velveteen,

Only few things happen to those who wait,

All others end up just being the bait.


I always felt that you were my princess,

But never realized I wasn’t your prince.

Now when I look up at the moon,

I know how it feels to be lonely.


My love life is far from getting over,

So, this Nocturnal Bird will keep singing forever.

  • Nocturnal Bird 

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19 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. The same guess you know
    Feb 13, 2011 @ 17:03:02

    romba over a iruku dai…..mudiyalae

    Reply

  2. Kartik Srinivasan
    Feb 13, 2011 @ 17:57:19

    Lovely lovely lovely. This is what I feel after reading this. Very happy to read such a poem. great

    Reply

  3. Saradha
    Feb 15, 2011 @ 05:52:04

    a good one.. written as if experienced:)

    Reply

  4. Ramakrishnan
    Feb 15, 2011 @ 07:36:10

    Wonderful , expressing the feelings through writing is exellant.

    Reply

  5. Komal
    Feb 15, 2011 @ 09:47:07

    Fabulous!!!

    Reply

  6. bhuvana ramesh
    Feb 15, 2011 @ 12:02:58

    Hope this nocturnal bird sings at high pitch during night than during day.
    Good attempt!!!! ( what attempt?????)

    Reply

  7. Ramabadran Kannan
    Feb 16, 2011 @ 01:56:18

    Bird is waiting So it is only the first song. Hope it can sing some happy as well. good! keep singing….

    Reply

    • Nocturnal Bird
      Feb 21, 2011 @ 13:10:33

      Kannan Sir,

      Yeah, this was my first sad song. Too real to be true!!
      As promised will keep singing forever.

      Reply

  8. Shiva
    Feb 20, 2011 @ 05:38:18

    Ok da. Not bad. But that’s all. Not that great as your eariler posts. I unable to remember any of the lines. Had no impact.

    1.5 stars out of 5

    Shiva

    Reply

  9. bhuvana ramesh
    Feb 23, 2011 @ 09:18:19

    As shiva told, it is really difficult to creat impact on Pathos songs. One can hardly beat Vasantha maaligai like songs by Kannadasan

    Kangal kaattum anbu enbathu
    kannil neerai vara vazhaipathu
    pengal kaatum anbu enbathu
    nammai pithhanaakki alaya vaipathu

    I don’t mean to scare anyone, especially who are already in the spell, though!

    Reply

  10. Soundarya Ramani
    Mar 25, 2011 @ 17:45:40

    Awesome flow…great imagination… U will definitely get ur princess 🙂

    Reply

  11. jlharini
    Sep 07, 2011 @ 06:02:47

    Hey creating an impression as though u had one:(
    ;0

    Reply

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