The day was bright,
Things were moving just right,
He and she were galloping nice.
Then came a guy brisk and swift,
Invisible and mischievous in his drift,
Bumped the damsel and started the rift.
The trio began to yell and grumble,
Hearing which men would tremble,
Sparks started flying all around,
Forcing men to seek safe ground.
The rumble lasted for some time,
She had held herself for a long time.
She couldn’t hold it back any longer,
Bursting out made him a lot weaker.
Story was different on the ground.
It was nothing short of Merry-go-around.
People below rejoiced in the rain,
Romance between clouds dissolved their pain,
Only one woman voiced her gloom,
Yelling to the sky,
“Rain Rain, Go away!!
My Little Johnny wants to play!!
Come again another day”
Nocturnal Bird
kartik111087
Jun 14, 2010 @ 03:15:01
Very good one, never knew it was about the rain you were talking about. enjoyed reading.
Shiva
Jun 14, 2010 @ 05:42:15
Seripusly, I thought Sahasra theme song was your best effort, this was 100 times more wonderful. I think you have struck a purple patch. Nice one, me too, never imagined it was about rain.
Ok fine, where did you copy it from?????????????/
Shiva
iswaryaj
Jun 14, 2010 @ 07:08:20
guru…awesome……..
mohamed
Jun 14, 2010 @ 11:47:55
Seriously, i never knew that u had such good knowledge of English. A great poem.
Divya
Jun 19, 2010 @ 15:15:05
Hey superb da
It was really nice
soundarya
Jun 24, 2010 @ 16:25:32
good one.. u kept the momentum goin.. n trust me i loved the rhymin scheme..
cheers to ruth ma’am.. 😉
harini
Jun 30, 2010 @ 13:55:50
hmmm ……….bro …good 1 yaar
harini
Jun 30, 2010 @ 13:57:12
i never even knew tat ther is a shelley insid u
harini
Jun 30, 2010 @ 13:59:23
wow..my bro writes poem too ah……thats gr8..